Dude, this story is EXCELLENT. No really, its fantastic. I was worried that you would go over the top with the domination/slave aspect of it, but you didnt you managed to progress it up to more intense levels without trying to do it in the period of a few paragraphs.
flawless victory...
and the story was even better.
that was awsome, but im the sick kinda person that laughed a little when u killed off his parents, but only becuse it was a story i dont think i would do the same if it was in real life. however truly amaizing story. u have my aproval
stry i just had to read it again, its so descriptive but yet perfict, absolutly award wining story, i love you dude ^_^
i have to concur... incredible story.
Now THAT was a great story. I was wondering if peoples was still writing fart fictions and i'm glad to see there is.
Congratulations on this one it was simply splendid.
Billyzen
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